|Reviews for Leatherbound|
| Rayna chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
It is well written and I love your similes. I know it is a short story but it is a little too short. If it was expanded especially in terms of the friendships it would really stick out. Right now it sounds like a summary to something bigger. Your character needs to capture the audience more. We need to feel her love, struggle, disappointment and eventual renewual. We need to feel that satisfaction in the end. And I think the way to do that is to put more depth into the character. Overall it sounds like a good beginning to what could be a great story. I consider this an abstract.