|Reviews for Flower Petals|
| Reel Wander chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
youth, and freedom
but, I also read, loosing ones self
nicely written, making me wander
I like it
| RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I like that you begin the last line with 'flying free' because it's the end of the poem so it emphasises how long they have to wait for freedom.
I also like the idea of chance you explore on the second line as it makes the action seem more erratic and tragic.
Ceri from the Review Marathon (link in profile)