Reviews for Parallel: The Seven Earths
GreenstoneRie chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I like how you put lots of detail into your writing.
Really good :)
Penninc and Vostaert chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
So far, it really is an interesting story. I really want to know how it is all going to fit together.

The only thing: sometimes there's you're instead of your or where instead of we're, but it's nothing big.
aern chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Good start, I'm interested in seeing what comes next.