Reviews for Bleed
meowmie chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
TheGirlWithTheNotepad chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
That was incredibly written. You made something that is so sad, beautiful. Well done.
professional griefer chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
That was...insanely good.

Your descriptions were really good, they set up a great mood for the story. The emotions were beautifully done, and I love the second line/paragraph.

I also love your description of the actual cutting, the way you wrote about it just felt real and was really well written.

The narrative style is beautiful, very efficient, descriptive, and just lovely to read.

You managed to make an awful and familiar subject beautiful.

GREAT job.
Fanatical Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Wow. Very well written. I don't usually understand stories written in second person, but that one I did :-)