Reviews for Acquaintances
Ancaroch chapter 1 . 3/26
Ok, so far I love everything you've written, this one especially. That being said, for those rhyme critics, the formatting is a little off, but like I said, I love it, I wouldn't change a thing.
The Hippie Nerd chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
It's fascinating how, despite not fully grasping what you were probably going for, and not totally clear on the relationship between you and the person you're writing about, the emotions came through loud and clear. So, more succinctly, I love it. I sensed such strong emotions, both positive and negative, conveyed wonderfully through the "I know you..." refrain. Now I'm going to go back and read through it again to try and understand it better. I'm glad I chanced upon this piece!