|Reviews for A Thousand Memories|
| Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Italics seem a little off. Hm. Maybe this shoulda been written in first person, and then they could just intermingle with the narration. That's always so much easier XD.
There's still some tense changes-the first and last paragraphs are past tense. Those bloody tenses are so hard to keep track of. :P
All in all, I like how this turned out!
| walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
That was definately interesting and fun to read.
You couldve made it longer, but I still enjoyed reading it.