Reviews for Wish
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Oh I like this! The opening stanza includes the reader with we and our- immediately gaining attention. The "sky peeling off in sheets of scattered blue" is an amazing image. Here the you is not the reader (how do you do that?) and the reader is witnessing a scene between the narrator and the "you." We readers are not sure exactly what is happening, but the root emotions are apparent. Lovely ending- the we includes readers once again. (Maybe tear instead of tears to link up with "blink it back"?)
goodnessknows chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I like this piece a whole lot.
leeleepupu chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I really liked this poem! I would prefer imagination over reality too. keep up the good work. Keen on reading more poems from you.