Reviews for synonymous
classic violet chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
I hope writing this poem helped a bit :p It has really beautiful diction.
Nanumi chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Your simple use of words highlights your theme of the futility of language, which I enjoyed. "Leaks through my pores/Poring over each one" was my favourite line, because of the double-entendre. I wasn't sure about the word choice "thumbing" for the last word in the third verse; rifling, perhaps, would have fitted better? Overall, I really liked this, but capitalisation/punctuation would make it far more reader-friendly.