|Reviews for Laughing at the Eagle|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
I'm too stupid to talk about all the metaphorical meanings I see, but I happen to love this one. In fact, I quite like your style.
| Morwain chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
| Snowy Moon chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
the title fits perfect... I like the style... the way you used short lines then placed a long line at the end of each phrase... it was a great piece...
| Loup17 chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
weeeeee nice, it almost feels like i can really hear what a dragon is thinking (dragons are cool) almost.
| Jo The Pirate chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
'the sun is darker than the shadow of his wings'
Gah! I love it. That has to be the best ending line to a poem I've ever read. I love the messages written between the lines as well. Beautifully done.
| just like me chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
Awsome poem! I love dragons!
| shredmyties chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
i can see why this would be published, the details are entrancing and attractive (in my opinion)
the syllable's rythm lures the reader on, a special style you have, haven't seen it in others at all, that i must admit _
| Kuroi Yosei chapter 1 . 8/15/2002
i love dragons and this poem was quite interesting. very pleasant!
| wqwq chapter 1 . 8/12/2002
cool i like fantasy stuff
| hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 8/11/2002
it's great. i like the line 'his breath is music' best. great work
| Hikarineko Skadi chapter 1 . 8/9/2002
pretty weal an eagel was my old mascot was and i laughted at the painting on the front off the school. you know what they killed an eagel a long time ago just to put it in our trophy chase i don't go ther any more i go to a chater seee ya kari
| Jateshi chapter 1 . 5/29/2002
You have a very beautiful style. I feel honored that you would even like some of my older poetry. *grins*
You have a wonderful way with words Ellerfru
| moonbunny38 chapter 1 . 5/27/2002
it's lovely. it's wooooonderful! all my reviews are starting to sound the same, but that's all i have to say.
| lady alpha chapter 1 . 5/20/2002
Cool. I like dragons. Aren't they fire creatures? You don't seem to mind. But then, dragons are wonderful creatures...
| playergurl chapter 1 . 5/19/2002
Nice imagery. It's how I imagine dragons to be like. Are the last lines supposed to be so long?