Reviews for Disappearance
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Short and sweet.

I love the first line because it's so heavy with the feeling of nostalgia.

Then the abruptness of the disappearance in the second line; it contrasts with the first so well. And the suddenness brings a certain sadness to the poem which is great.

Love this

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