Reviews for Technicolor
logan89 chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
Mason moving from place to place and on her way to Athens. Being 4 years old everything in the world seems so large and you capture her feelings about moving perfectly. I like your line about Mason's ears exploded on the airplane because I think most people can relate to that feeling. Thank you for sharing.
logan89 chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Nice short story about a young girl coming to terms with herself and who she is. This story is right to the point, with no wasted words being used. You manage to give her age (middle school), and short music history. Good job writing.