Reviews for The Dark
KShade chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I really liked it! It was dark without being super depressing!
Inquiete chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Whoa nicely done my friend, it sent chills down my spine. :)
WordsTasteLikeCaramel chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
This was literally amazing. I truly TRULY admire those who can rhyme without sounding clipped and emotionless. That said- I want to repeat myself- this was BRILLIANT. It was so descriptive and it hooked me from the start- I absolutely adored these lines:

"The dark can scare/The dark can slither.

The dark can live/The dark can quiver."

You made the words flow so smoothly :).

I loved it.
believe the impossible chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
I really loved it! I liked the style and I thought it flowed really well. :)
Wingless Hymn chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Wow, this was remarkable to read! I fell in love with each and every line. Great work! :D

Keep it up! You'll be a fantastic writer!

Yours Truly,

Wingless Hymn