|Reviews for California|
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
This is a very lovely Haiku. Amazing job, keep it up :D
| RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I love that it starts with a confession. Confessions at the start of a poem always draw me in and make me want to continue reading.
I love the shortening of California to Cali. In the context of your use of the words 'kidnapped' and 'promised' it sounds like a pet name for a woman or for a guy you love.
Ceri from the Review Marathon (link in profile)