|Reviews for Ritual|
| Shadowswept chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Wow! You are very talented. I absolutely love your poem. It's hard to pick one line, because the whole thing is so good. My favorite is probably as the liquid emotion splashes across my cheeks. You should check out . It's a site for serious writers and poets. You are clearly a real poet. You captured perfectly the emotions of lost love.
| Wingless Hymn chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
So sweetly worded :) I love the flow of the poem. It was beautifully written and heartfelt.
Keep at it! :D