cant wait for the next chapter. i dont like hannah maybe because im more of a confident person in real life and i hate people who use you to compare themselves to make them feel better. i wish she slips on some vodka. :D

Dwyane has a funny name...try saying it really fast a couple times and you'll see what I mean. Reminds me of a guitar string...
Aaanyhoow, poor, poor Hannah. Not. Mwhahaha!
...I'm sorry, I'm feeling a bit randomly insane today. I should probably try to avoid leaving reviews when I'm in moods like this, because it always ends with a crazy, rambling, random review that most of the time makes little sense...
You went to the beach? That's nice. I hope you had a lot of fun. Happy authors make for better writing.
Right. Back onto the track I so obviously deviated from, can't wait for the next chapter! I want to see Hannah's reaction...

Thanks for the update, even though it's short...or I just felt like it coz the end was a cliffhanger. But yes, Dwyane and Remi saw each other again! Can't wait to know what happens next with Hannah being there. And I wonder if Remi will get busted for lying to her.

I don't mind Dwayne, but Hannah is a very unlikeable character. I hope Dwayne brings her down a peg or two. Thanks for updating.

""There," I turned back to him, pointing my finger at his chest, "that." I really like this. Enough to copy and paste it onto this review. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. And she really needs to tell Hannah what's going on...

I just love their interactions...I think I said that before, but I do. They're very enjoyable.

Hi!

Oh my God, I am so excited about your story! I read your profile before deciding to review and I'm quite sure I know the basketball player you were referring to. I am a fan of him, as well as the other one who shares the same name as the lead guy here in your story. In fact, he's my crush. Dwyane Wade, I mean. I'm a fan of the whole team they belong to actually and was overjoyed that they won championships this season. Hehe.

Anyway, I'm really excited about this. I can't wait what will happen if Remi and Dwyane meet again. They are, aren't they? Oh, I'm sure they are!) Also, what Hannah's reaction would be if she finds out given that she's interested in Dwyane.

Please keep up the good writing and awesome plot! I will definitely be subscribing.

-hani

Still liking it, which is good ;) haha. Can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe you wanna check my story out? You don't have to, but if you do, please criticize to your hearts content. I know it needs it, haha.

I like this chapter. It definitely turned away from Just Wright, which is good. The only thing I saw was that "there was a

puss on her face" or something to that extent. Dd you mean pout?

This is very readable and fun. It does sound like a movie plot, like one of your other reviewers said, but that's not a bad thing. I do like the banter between the two of them, it's fun and builds up their chemistry. My only issue is Remi considering herself a second chance girl - I don't like girls who just assume they don't deserve anything...but that's just me. One minor thing, Remi suddenly 22 in chapter 3 (the last flashback section), but she is 23 in the other two chapters and your summary...typo...?

Their attitudes while drunk are extremely hilarious. *smoooch* "I don't like you." "I think you're a snob." Wow. Just wow. XD

A fantastic start, to a hopefully fantastic story, if it continues in these lines. Can't wait to read more.

Well, I like the plot, and I like your writing style. So I think I'll keep reading :) The only thing I can think of is that it's a bit similar to that one movie that I can't think of the name right now, but it has Queen Latifah in it. But other than that, its great. And yeah, a vet's assistant is nothing to sneeze at. I'm not one, but my dad is a vet, and I've seen what his assistants do. Sure, they might pet the animals, but they also get bit, peed on scratched, and pretty much everything else, haha.