Reviews for Lifesaver
The Hetalians chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Thank you for reviewing, min'na!
:3 -hugs and hands cookies-
I love y'all, and I'll try to update soon.
Max Sorrell chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
Awesome chapter! It's sad that the girl is so nice. I hope he doesn't kill her.
SW chapter 2 . 7/14/2012


Elandil chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
Hey, you have a good plot line here, and it will be interesting to see how it develops in the later chapters. Keep up the good work Onea-chan :P
Max Sorrell chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I love the idea of this story so far! Please update. I kind of find it weird that Kuro has to befriend someone only to kill someone later on. You're right that is twisted, so twisted it's hard to believe, but I think that's also why I like it. I can't wait to read more! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Well, I haven't really got much to work with, but overall, I think you've got a great plot line. I don't doubt your writing talents at all. In the first chapter that you've written, you've managed to capture my interest. :)

For the next chapter, you may want to try to dive a little deeper into Kuro's feelings. If the reader is able to connect with the character emotionally, it is beneficial to the story :)

I hope my review was useful to you. I also hope you will continue this story with marvelous writing and ideas as you've already begun :)

Good luck!