Reviews for I Never Wished for This
MagicWords chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
You have a really nice opening!

I was going to ask you how old the princess was. It seems very unclear. At one point she's throwing cake and in the other she is discussing marriage. I have no clue.

And is Dally the cook? And the maid, or are these two different people. I was lost with who Maggi is and who Dally I just lost? Maybe I read this too fast.

But it was not bad. Keep it up. :)