|Reviews for Is the Heartbeat of a Spider so Small?|
| SilenceInHonour chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
There's a real sense of calm in this poem. Most people are scared of spiders but it feels like you've just sat down, completely afraid and watched it at work for a few hours. This poem just has that soft feel. I also like the formatting breaking it apart like the trailing threads.
| The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Great Poem! I love the intense immagery, and although it ook me a while to get the flow with the spacing and additions ofpuncuation, I like that too! You have two noticeable errors, and I have a feeling that they are just typos. In the fifth line, "it need to be ancored." it should read, "it needS..."
and in the sixth line, "first she spun, then waited, the spun, then waited," should read "first she spun, then waited, theN spun..."