Reviews for When Tomorrow Comes
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I like the tone of this because it really enforces a sense of hopelessness upon the poem, something that attaches and matches really well with the questions that seem already answered and the last line.

I also like the questions because it nicely contrasts between the narrator's current life and the life that is the envied and the dwindling dream. Gives it a nice envious feel, an almost despairing envy; he has to look at this sort of life and it's too far away for him to reach.
my.life.is.over chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Nice!
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
That was good, I liked this and I understand the meaning. These poems are really great, keep publishing them