|Reviews for Kimmi|
| Blood and Butterflies chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Interesting. This is very deep, maybe more so than you thought when you started writing it. If this was a true story, that is indeed a shame, but sometimes things must be sacrificed in order to see the light. However, I think this may have done better in terms of flow and rhythm if you created another line after every time it rhymed.