|Reviews for crow|
| RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Form/structure: I was unsure about your structure as the line length didn't fit the pattern exactly. Line 1 stanza 1 had 4 instead of 5 syllables, line 2, stanza 2 had 6.
Ending with one word worked visually though and separating the word 'dies' definetely made it's meaning more impactful which was great.
I did wonder what the poem was about though as it starts with 'like a crow' not 'a crow' - mysterious, I like :)
Ceri from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
| FixitfelixJRJRJR chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
First line has four syllables
Fifth has six.
This poem seems disjointed, the lines unconnected, like there are several unresolved stories.
P.S. Rooney Maara?
| the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Brilliant. This is the perfect example of less being more. And the ending hit me like a brick. Killer last word (no pun intended).
| YuePantera chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Wow... In such a short poem you were able to create such an emotional, creepy poem. I liked it! :D x