Reviews for Illusory |
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![]() ![]() Great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok Lysse-one I am not sure what to make of Van's father-he seems to be an asshole but I do like his mom and my curiosity is now up 100 fold about his siter. GREAT STORY going here and since I CANNOT WAIT for more and I have several chapters to go I am on my way there now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well Lysse-you DEFINITELY have a SUSPENSEFUL MYSTERY going on this story and it is quite INTRIGUING! I am DYING TO KNOW MORE and so I am on to the next chapter-GREAT JOB SO FAR GIRL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, amazing chapter, i almost cried when Krekkel was torn apart. :l I wonder what happens now though, the aftermath of it all. |
![]() ![]() Too lazy to sign in but aww it went by too fast! I loved the hellcat though, she really adds to the story, :3 Ember really needed a friend, I think... She seems so lonely with just Van, and this whole chapter sort of illustrates how much of her life has been taken up by magic and the like. I wonder if she notices, though, liking Van and all... |
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![]() ![]() ![]() update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, i wonder whatll happen in the next chapter.. I kind of dont get why ember is being so unreasonable towards Van but i like the tension they manage to build up. Heres hoping the next chapter comes up soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lots of Van in this chapter I love him |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh wowowow I love this new side of Van, it is so sexy how he lusts after her and how he doesn't quite know how to deal with it... Oooh please please please update :D XXX Discover |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! VAN VAN VAN VAN VAN VAN VAN |
![]() ![]() Totally Team Van hahaha he also reminds me of a guy I know with his behaviour... But I really like that Ember is starting to learn magic! Keep the updates coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooooh wowowow i loved it when he kissed her... it is what i have been waiting for! omg and the knives thing i thought the guy from the forest was back... ooh and just a thought when he was showering his voice was streaned was he umm releiving some northward pressure !?... ooh and i loved their supper awakward convo after it and how Van was all blushy and didnt want to catch her gaze oooh and last thing... it was brilliant i loved it alllllll and it was brilliantly written! UPDATE! xxx Discover |
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