Reviews for Duke's Adventures
Punslinger chapter 6 . 7/16/2012
This is very nice. I'm sure little children will enjoy
it because they like to think that animals can talk and
behave like humans. But I'm confused about the names
of the two boys. I seem to remember that one was named
Kevin in an earlier chapter.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/10/2012
Good chapter. Duke seems well on his way to some
fascinaring encounters with new people. It's
interesting to know that there was a real Duke. I hope he had a good life with lots of adventures.
Herky Illiniwek chapter 5 . 7/10/2012
This story is fabulous! I hope Duke gets back to the little boy in the pet shop :)
Punslinger chapter 4 . 7/8/2012
Good chapter. I see that you used my suggestion to have
Kevin re-visit the pet store. I wonder what adventures
Duke will have next.
Punslinger chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
This is a good chapter. I can't think of any
suggestions for Duke's adventures. But you might write something about the little boy who wanted him, how he
goes back to the pet store and feels disappointed when
he learns that Duke has been sold.
Punslinger chapter 2 . 7/1/2012
This is very nice and makes the reader wonder if Duke's
adventures will eventually take him to the litle boy
who wants him so much.
Punslinger chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
This is a nice start of a good story to read to small children. I'm sure they will fall in love with the puppies.
ultimatelaurafan chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Aw. Cuuuuuute! :)
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