|Reviews for Home Is Where The Broken Hearts Are|
| Miggles chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I loved this - really well-written and emotive. I do find the situation between the parents and the daughter a little hard to believe though; I know it does happen that parents don't like one or more of their children, but it doesn't happen very often, and it tends to be because of drink/drug problems etc..., not simply because they decided they don't like that particular child.
However, it ties in with the sotry well, and you don't exaggerate it to Cinderella type proportions, so I don't think it's too much of an issue.
The only error I could spot was this: 'She hadn't care enough' - I thikn you mean 'cared'
Otherwise, a really powerful opening, and I can't wait to read more.