Reviews for One Day He Will Come and Hopefully My Wishes
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
This was sad. Its funny, quite funny. Its funny because when you find someone else you'll forget about him.

Before:

His smile made you happy, his laugh made you laugh, the thought of him made you smile.

After:

You avoid his smile you laugh at the things you did that were so stupid and meaningless. The thought of him makes you laught... but when you seem him you look at the other direction.

All I am saying is that I don't quite believe in love just yet. One experience can change your POV
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Enjoy your youth, don't waste it shattering your soul over boys who you'll struggle to even remember ten years from now. Put a smile on your face girl, before you know it you'll have a mortgage, a job and kids and you'll wish you'd spent these days having fun.

Chin up! Keep writing :)

Alan.