|Reviews for I Am Not a Doll, This Is Not a Dollhouse|
| Darby Kate chapter 1 . 1/15
This is really good- a little inappropriate- but good! You're one of the first people I've seen to write with mostly correct grammar and spelling! Keep up the good work!
| Felicia Huey chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Okay, yes, it's an experiment to prevent teen pregnancy, but there is no way that everyone in the world- Aka the president, etc would agree with it. So you should add some background to this. Also, they are being waaaay to casual about it. Wouldnt their parents get pissed, as a matter of fact, wouldn't they get pissed if they randomly took a pill to make them pregnant? And why bother having specific guys to each girl?
Other than that, I do like the idea of the story and I'm looking forward to reading more.
| MaybeIaminlove chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
OMG THIS IS AWESOME! You should make more soom
| kadienewberg chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
I love your story