|Reviews for turnover|
| firefox vixen chapter 7 . 7/8
| vara silverwing chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
This is getting really good hun! I hope it'll be ok and everything for his friend, :o I hope you can update soon!
| Sayure chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
This chapter is better.
| Sayure chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
The problem in your style of writings is that you don't use paragraphs. You need paragraphs and space between them otherwise it hurt on the eye and it's not welcoming to read.
| Nevermore23 chapter 5 . 11/21/2012
Is he dead!?
Please update soon!
| Nevermore23 chapter 2 . 11/5/2012
Its good so far
I can't wait to read more, please update soon