Reviews for Devil's Desire
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
I really like the rhythm you've captured with this. Nice and succint and still making it sound natural...as far as spells go of course. A Macbeth speak with a modern and unique spin to it. It really does sound like it can be chanted. Nicely done.

The only critique I could offer is perhaps some of your word choices as they sound a little to...umm, mild I guess, in comparison to a witches' spell which sounds a little more gruesome as far as language goes. The ending's fine, but some words at the beginning, eg. [Requirements that are far from nice.] - I'm pretty doubtful of the use of requirements there. Rather mild. But that's about it.