Reviews for Gone
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I like the image of the first stanza because it comes out nice and gentle, natural with the lolling imagery about it as well as the rhyming structure, so it nicely sets the tone to crumble in later stanzas.

To be honest, I don't like the ending. The two "stanzas" separate are fine, but they don't particularly connect together in my view. The stanza break somehow doesn't seem adequate in alienating that final line, giving it that "push". It's one of the places where punctuating your poem would help. A bit nitpricky I suppose, but that's what came to mind.