Reviews for The Forlorn Delphinidae
loivissa17 chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
i'm speechless... do you normally talk like that? if yes, then... wow. :D . if not, how do you do it? i would love to write fluently with words like that...
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
I don't like the definite way you've written this. I think it would work better more ambiguously, ie. [The silhouette of vessel form] - a silhouette or the silhouette of a vessel form] - it's more flowing, less concise and therefore more effective with the imagery.

I like the length of your lines though because they add to the soft shadowy tone of the overall poem.