Reviews for Hide and Seek
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Ooh, I like this. There's a strong sense of loneliness to it - a strong sense of seclusion. The title is "Hide and Seek" but it's obvious that the speaker is not really referring to the game. I think s/he feels invisible - like no one can find him/her - and s/he wants someone to. This hits uncomfortably close to home, I must say, but I commend it for that.

I love the bit about the "quivering stars up past their bedtimes" and the oceans snapping "with severed spinal cords." Again, you impress me with imagery. Keep up this great work!