Reviews for Equals
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
I don't know how you manage to convey so much in so few words. The only image really is the stone pillars- how the narrator and the other take turns holding up the roof- and yet in the destruction - when both finally can't maintain- both reveal themselves fully to each other.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
I liked it! It was a bit short and I didn't think that the last line quite worked but I liked the first three very much :-D