The length of the beginning sentence structure and paragraphs put me off at first, but I've begun to like this story, especially the different sides of Bastion that we're getting to learn about.

I love this story. I read it a few years ago and still think of it. Lots of fun!

Guess we won't find out how old he is in this chapter. Good slight of hand off the topic, Bastion.

Another great chapter. I like the way you incorporate meal times in the story. In some stories, I have never seen a character eat anything. Not even candy so its good that you added at least some basic human needs and apparently wizard needs too. (_) I really hope Bryan's mom comes around. (_-_) I feel really bad for our two characters but I'm glad they are taking it surprisingly well!

I love Bastian! I love Bryan! And frankly, I love this story so darn much. I am surprised at the amount of reviews this story has gotten and I can't help but to find that so unfair. You are a wonderful author and I love the way you present your characters.

Lol it seems like Bryan is developing separation anxiety in this chapter. I wonder what Bryan's parents want to tell Bryan? XD

Oh. My. GOD. SO CUTE! There were moments that made me blush, made me laugh, and some that even made my mouth drop open! All signs of a lovely story, in my opinion. I am seriously in love with the chapter titles though, hahha. 'The Weird' this, 'The Weird' that, it's awesome! :D I'll definitely be checking out the sequel, for sure.

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I really should learn to not read stuff like this while at work... when random customers walk in... it is kinda jolting, and akward for me. That was really hot...

...Wasn't there mention about Bastions wife in the last chapter? ...Is that just going to be ignored by Bryan? I don't think I could igmore that myself...

I'm not good at reviews, but, I'll try.
I liked it. It was a cute little story, and the pace was good, I thought. A peeve of mine with stories is when characters, after knowing each other for a week, suddenly start spouting, "I love you"s like they're going out of style. You avoided that, and when it finally did come to it, I felt you handled it realistically. I also like that you didn't make the story all about the sex, which seems to happen fairly often in romantic stories. You kept with your plot and didn't let it devolve into mindless smut.
If you don't to read criticism, you can skip over this next bit. The only thing I felt could use a bit of work was the action scene. It seemed kind of forced, I guess. Action is always hard to write, though, and you didn't do a terrible job, so I feel with practice, that's something you could easily fix.
All in all, I think you're a pretty good writer, and I'll keep an eye on you.

I would turn her into a roach! Thanks for the update.

No. Oh my god. What was that chapter? UPDATE SOON I'M SCARED.

I can't believe he's told his mom that he fucked in that bed...

Momma is mad...

Parents are visiting...what could go wrong?

PLEASE POST MORE SOON. THIS IS THE CUTEST THING IVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE. I NEED MORE. IM FOAMING AT THE MOUTH.