This one was cute. :)

Aw! This was so sweet. The first story I've ever read on fiction press! I seriously enjoyed it!

Young teenage love. Tsk tsk tsk. Sadly I didn't have to go through it-although, I'm kinda thankful : p Well written. That Twitchy is so gullible. The whole story sounds like your typical high school drama! Intense. Keep on writing! The only con I noticed was the over use of commas around the intro.