Reviews for she never was
dream-beautiful chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
wow. took a while for me to interpret, but that's just my slow, poetically impaired brain. great.
a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
i really like how your poetry always seems to tell a story. great descriptions, this was lovely.
anachronistic chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
wow hell yeah... intense

"the thief stole her soul and sold it for cocaine and dishsoap" good good
BellaMaroney0808 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
That was dark, and wonderful... Though anyone who is able to write about pain in that sense has pain inside them... I hope that you're just a good poet, and not suffering.
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Very intense- this may sound a little odd, but it puts me in mind of "All Along the Watch Tower" - modern sensibility against and older backdrop.