Reviews for Heartache
mr. razhik chapter 30 . 1/18/2013
very well improve you could add new ideas or introduce the idea of new about one person can be pretty boring I have done it myself.
KaylaHeart chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I have felt just about every part of this poem. But that last line sums up just about everything I've ever written. Nice!
khiz chapter 24 . 12/4/2012
I think you did a real good job and the poem really takes me in.
Brianarae0408 chapter 3 . 12/3/2012
These poems are really great because there is something so real and honest about them. I can tell that they are coming from the heart and that there is a lot of emotion behind them! Please continue.
isadronicus chapter 12 . 9/25/2012
awww your funny
isadronicus chapter 11 . 9/25/2012
that was great
isadronicus chapter 10 . 9/25/2012
you're so cute. i love your writing
isadronicus chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
that was great (heart)
Louisa4533 chapter 18 . 9/8/2012
Keep going. You'll make it through.
isadonicus chapter 16 . 7/25/2012
well composed i loved it
isadonicus chapter 15 . 7/24/2012
i like it when guys don't swear too because i don't
isadonicus chapter 14 . 7/24/2012
i love the chapters you sound like me
isadonicus chapter 13 . 7/24/2012
your making me want to cry
isadonicus chapter 12 . 7/24/2012
never stop writing
isadonicus chapter 11 . 7/24/2012
cute chapter loved it so so soooooooooooooooooo much
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