|Reviews for first breath after coma|
| rust phoenix chapter 3 . 12/13/2012
i love the imagery in your writing. it's so beautiful and melancholy and visual and arg so good so good so good.
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
i love the specificity in this piece, and the repetition at the end. very evocative.
| aria's melody chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
This is amazing. Very poetic. Great job :)
| punctured.lungs chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
beautiful & perfect & inspiring.