Reviews for Perpetual
dragonflydreamer chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
Simple, and not quite as original as the last one, but it definitely captures the moment. I especially like the sadness mixed into a moment of such joy and the way emotions just overwhelm you like that. Good ending; that one word says so much.
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Interesting descriptions in this. Reading just the dialogue, it sounds like a very normal conversation, but the way you work in description like "inflamed soul" and "small whitened puff of carbon dioxide," it sets this up for something much darker.