This is a very good essay, but I think you have too many facts.

I think this is a magnificent eesya good job. I'm looking forward to reading another..

lov the essay you inspired me two write a living forever essay

Very well done and informative essay, thank you :-)

This is a bit like a science paper, and god knows that I've written enough of those. Admittedly, this isn't the most engaging story I've ever read, but that's okay, because it has to do with mundane topics and sounds, for the most part, unfictional. On the upside, your grammar is impeccable, so that's good.

I really like this essay because you offer good points, such as overpopulation and unemployment. Those two factors alone are major issues to think about if one wants to live longer. The world needs death, in my view, or it will crumble. It wasn't meant to last forever, and if people live longer, they will just take up more of the Earth's resources.

I also like all the little numbers, percentages, and facts you add along with your essay because it helps me understand the issue more and it makes it more believable. :)

My only suggestion is to change statements like "Everyone wants to live longer..." You can't know for sure that "everyone" wants this, or feels a certain way.

Wow. I don't want to live longer just because I don't want to spend more time in our idiotic society than humanly possible. I never even thought about these possibilities. And these are just natural causes and financial problems. If everyone lived longer, there's no telling what the fatal crime rates will be like.

You have clearly done your research. I don't see anything to criticize negatively.

Great read!

I completely agre with you, I just wanted to point something out. We could solve our problems, controlling birt-rate. Society already has issues with it, as you brought out, so why not firstly settle matters with that? I am not against the idea of living if just little longer but everything must be considered fist and this is no different.

Very insightful