|Reviews for Death by Vampire|
| donsilvercat chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
very well written. The plot is good and your use of
English is excellent. Use of details makes the story more believeable. Sort of scary even though books and tv have worked over the vampire theme almost to exhaustion. A little too "slick" the way they passed from strangers to being in love to being married without any conflict along the way.
She might have had some hint of what was to come. All in all it is a good story well told and interesting.
I would send a signed review but fiction press seems to have lost my identity. I have reviewed dozens of stories in the past ten years as donsilvercat or donsilvercat3
Thanks for sharing.
| love971 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
This could very well be a one shot. I enjoyed it! I did see a tiny thing where you didin't put " marks as the character spoke, but really that was all. It seemed a bit fast paced but it was a prologue afterall and it couln't be too long. I find myself wanting to know more about Victoria and why her husband killed her. I also want to tell you that you did a great job setting things up! I cant wait for the next chapter!
Keep it up! :)