Reviews for Innocence and Instinct |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. I definitely enjoyed her growth in the society. She has a very strong and flexible spirit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This short story was a really nice read. Different and refreshing at the same time. There were a couple of times I felt like I had missed something, but overall it was good. I'd love to read a story about Sias! Does she learn to read/write like her mom wishes? How does she grow up in such an unorthodox manner? How do humans react to her? Oh, and does Caruna return to human society? I need answers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I loved this story and your characters! Amazing world and creation you have here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Curiously fascinating x) The depths of human adaptability, though I wasn't really fond of the ending, the story's concept itself (a human living among wolves kind of thing) is really interesting! Hanna. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks love the story, hope you write more. Would love to see what happens to them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a really cute ending. I would definitely be interested in that sequel of yours. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story :) Very interesting how the demons have adopted her as one of their own. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So..strange. I quite liked it, as it progressed slowly. The problem is that although the time span was slow...It was like time skipped in the chapters? So It was less fill time, and more like "This happened (event 1)...then this (event 2) (don't worry it was 4 months later)" instead of being "this happened(event 1)...this this this (minor story details) ... this ... this... then this happened (event 2)" between the big two events. I have no idea if that made sense. Either way, it was quite enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() i love the your story...hope to read more of your creations... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say this one of the best stories I ever read yet. This story was so amazing is that I read ( couldn't stop reading ) in one day. I hope there is squeal. Nice very nice. |
![]() ![]() Love it :)))))))) I'm sad it ended but also happy how it ended ! I LOVE UUU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so up for a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your idea for a sequel sounds great! Amazing end! Do hope you continue... Chiisutofupuru |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Great story I enjoyed every moment of it, aww can't believe it's ended after so long. And I was here since the beginning :) thank you for writing such a wonderful story -be1smoke |