Reviews for Innocence and Instinct
ImmaQTPie chapter 18 . 6/20/2013
Love it
DarkHorseLover chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
Hmm, yes that does sound good, eh? Bring on the sequel when you get it started! :D Glad to hear you are continuing.
RoxLeFay chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
Very nice ending, I applaud you. And please do write a sequel! It would be so very interesting to read about the life of Sias! :)
Aurora MB chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
It is sad when a good story finishes. I hope you do write a sequel.
kiwi8fruit chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
I think you should just continue it on here under this same story, personally, but that's just me being opinionated.

An idea I would suggest for the sequel would be maybe more of the community adjusting to baby Sias, and a possible human encounter (if you can find a way to make that happen) though I'm definitely not asking for too much tragic angst or death. Maybe someone who understands being an outcast/understands the aspects and won't set off a witch hunt?

Just an idea.
DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
Oh good cuz I enjoyed the story. I was kinda disappointed that you skip the mating scene but seeing how it's rated T, I can understand. I look forward to the sequel.
Hoperising13 chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
please please please write a sequel to this
RoxLeFay chapter 17 . 6/19/2013
Wow great story! I love how original it is and very believable. Love the characters! They're so sweet! Can't wait to read more :D
DevourtheStars chapter 17 . 6/18/2013
Wow this is getting intense!
DarkHorseLover chapter 17 . 6/18/2013
Final update? NO! It needs to be longer, 18 chapters is too short. :'( Are you planning on a sequel? (Please?) If you don't plan on continuing would you let someone adopt this story?
be1smoke chapter 17 . 6/18/2013
xD AHHHH! It's gettin hot and heavy! Whew! **fans self
DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 17 . 6/18/2013
Uh oh it getting heated up in hereeeeee! Let turn up the heat with a long update and extra spicy, yes?
Trippy Hippie chapter 16 . 6/18/2013
It took me awhile searching through all the crap posted on this site to uncover this gem. I love this brilliant, unique idea of a story. Most stories I find on here are ones where the demon is way too good looking and, in effect, takes away the image of an actual demon. You captured the character of one better than most other authors I've seen on here; they mostly doll them up with good looks and have them in a Twilight sort of setting with an annoying girl constantly moaning and whining about everything. Again, this is an awesome work. I'm really surprised that there isn't as much feedback considering this is all very well thought out. I'm looking forward to your coming chapters.
JayLynn.Rummel chapter 16 . 6/17/2013
Eep! I need a new chapter!
DarkHorseLover chapter 16 . 6/16/2013
Awe, poor Guardian. He's jealous. :P Don't worry Guardian, she'll come 'round.
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