Reviews for Innocence and Instinct |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A few days?! Ahwww common! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wahoooo I'm so happy you updated! So the Guardian/Caruna thing is still on?! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awh! No, I'm not letting go! :) euuuuuu next chapter ;D (:s not in that way that Guardian's dying hehe, but as in excited to read more and on). :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ I love this story so much. Guardian is so adorable . IMO, this story really deserves a happy ending with a very lively Guardian. It would be so depressing if this turned into a tragedy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm excited for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not to shabby. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I just read all of the comments and noticed there is absolutely no real critism. I guess I shouldn't be surprised, I have no idea what to point out myself. You've made this story so darn cute! Chiisutofupuru |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahwww too cute! |
![]() ![]() M please, if'en you don't mind. ;P lol. I really did like this chapter; I wonder what other humans would think if they saw her living with the demons. Would she go back with her own kind? Or would she stay with Gardian? (I'd like to think she'd stay with him.) can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww :) who cares how short it is this is cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Something exiting has to happen... Whether you change the rating or not is ultimately your choice but... I suggest changing it and giving everyone what they've been waiting for (from their responses they want 'rated M') ...at the same time this could also be the end of your story. Otherwise, the only other suggestion I have is to give us something super cute. My only wish is for you to finish, doesn't matter when or how. Chiisutofupuru |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, first the 'guest' that reviewed chapter six below, was me. Didn't notice I wasn't logged in. Second: I think I fell in love with these characters. Chiisutofupuru |
![]() ![]() Where ever did you get the idea to write this story? I don't really have words to describe how interesting it is. The flow is great, the characters are just awesome, don't stop until you finish! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NNOOOOOOOO! Don't kepp it vague. That would ruin the story! Your doing a great job! Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Carina and guardian isn't really getting any closer in their relationship I noticed...:/ |