Reviews for Innocence and Instinct |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo i need more it can not stop this is ao brilliant and i love all the imagination that went into this please update aoon i can not wait ! XXX Discover |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw that is so cute! And I'm happy it was updated so soon! |
![]() ![]() Aw...I like it when you have those kinda stories you wish you could read on and on and on... But in this case, your just getting started. :D Fantastic story, I love where it's going (which I don't know exactly where XD)! Update when you can! ;D |
![]() ![]() Hi! This is the first story I've read here on fiction press :). Interesting story! |
![]() ![]() I loved it thought it was awsome im so reading the next chapter |
![]() ![]() This Canada begging for an update ASAP. Please? I'll be your best friend. ;P Anyway, all joking aside; I REALLY love your story, please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HeHe I lIkE yOuR sToRy AlOt! PlEaSe KeEp WrItInG! i WaNt To ReAd MoRe! :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting... very interesting. I like the story a lot, so please keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is pretty good so far. it's an interesting concept and I really just wanted to keep reading. Please keep it up. Your grammar is pretty good and so is your description. I would like to know more about the Demons and Caruna, but I'm sure that's coming later. Thanks for the good work, Z |