Reviews for Innocence and Instinct
Discoverthemagic chapter 4 . 7/7/2012
Noooo i need more it can not stop this is ao brilliant and i love all the imagination that went into this please update aoon i can not wait !
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sk84ndd327r0y chapter 4 . 7/6/2012
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
sk84ndd327r0y chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
Aw that is so cute! And I'm happy it was updated so soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
Aw...I like it when you have those kinda stories you wish you could read on and on and on... But in this case, your just getting started. :D Fantastic story, I love where it's going (which I don't know exactly where XD)!

Update when you can! ;D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Hi! This is the first story I've read here on fiction press :).
Interesting story!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I loved it thought it was awsome im so reading the next chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
This Canada begging for an update ASAP. Please? I'll be your best friend. ;P Anyway, all joking aside; I REALLY love your story, please continue.
Mitsudomoe chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
HeHe I lIkE yOuR sToRy AlOt! PlEaSe KeEp WrItInG! i WaNt To ReAd MoRe! :o)
sk84ndd327r0y chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
Interesting... very interesting. I like the story a lot, so please keep writing!
ezonad chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
This story is pretty good so far. it's an interesting concept and I really just wanted to keep reading. Please keep it up.

Your grammar is pretty good and so is your description. I would like to know more about the Demons and Caruna, but I'm sure that's coming later.

Thanks for the good work,

Z
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