This little chapter is amazing. Great job on the writing!

Okay, first of all, I loved this. I will definitely be reading it again at some point. Ivan reminds me of myself and Emerson is like the person I desperately hope I will meet someday and live happily ever after with. What I really want, though, is more. I am desperately curious about Ivan's family. I feel like there is so much more to Emerson than we got to see in this story, what with Ivan being Ivan and all. And I want to see Nico get swept off his feet by some lovely prince charming. Or, honestly, I would also love to see anything else you want to write and share with the world, because this story hit all of the right buttons and I want to see what else you can come up with.

Thank you. What I really love about this piece of work is how upbeat it was as it worked its way through. Comedy is harder than drama, whether performing it or writing it. What I also appreciate is the unique style of dialog you gave them, in a world of billions originality is RARE, well done. Romance is the largest genre out there and so tends to be, most often, formulaic, and yours was not. I am amazed how the conflict that is necessary to any story was at the same time presented with humour, and that is, much as I hate to give him any credit because he's an idiot, thanks to Ivan. How Emerson, or Nico, can put up with him, is beyond me. Though now my brain is reminding me that often if you don't recognize a particular type of character in your life it is because you are that character. Which is not true. I am so much more mature than Ivan. So there. And no, I am not sticking my tongue out.

Absolutely awesome story. I laughed out loud, a TON. Great characters, good depth, amazing humor. I would like to have a follow up story or epilogue.

That wa so cute and it made me laugh out loud more than once. I was crying at rich-ridge, ngl. Also altho im dissapointed at the lack of (penetrative) sexy scenes, there was no good place for it so well done for not trying to force it (y) Altho a (penetrative) one shot concerning them would be lovely :) xxx

I really enjoyed this story! Read it all today and it seemed a bit slow to start but it ended up in a great place! I was totally looking forward to more sexy scenes between them but I'll check your profile for an epilogue. It was so cute and funny and I'm so happy with the development and how cute their relationship is! Proud of your determination to finish this fic! Gonna go check our your other stories now!

Beautiful

This story was wonderful! I really loved it:D Emerson is such an awesome character and Ivan is very funny. The romance had me grinning like a fool and I loved the way you ended the story- I thought it was very appropriate for them. An epilogue would have been the cherry on the top of this amazing story (cake) but the ending this way was good enough.

I really enjoyed this little story of yours. Hope you're still writing slash somewhere, especially some longer ones instead of the one-shots. You've got a nice, easy, natural style and a great sense of humor. Your characters are smoothly written. Really liked Ivan's spoiled brattitude!

This is my first time ever finishing a long fic without having mixed feelings about the story/characters. Probably cause I like extremely slow relationship build up and less of the romantic mushy stuff that comes after the love confession. .; Nonetheless, congrats on completing a multichaptered fic! I enjoyed the conversations between Ivan and Emerson. Even Nico became likable after awhile. In all honesty, while reading this fic, I was desperately hoping that the pairing would be Ivan/Emerson and not somehow Ivan/Nico b/c the former was just too cute. XD

*cough* consider making a sequel i loved this.

maybe a look at ivan and e's relationship

I really enjoyed this story. The characters were great and the story was easy to read and attention grabbing. Great story.

Awwww the ending was so cute! I loved all the characters and the story was just sweet overall. Awesome :)

It's a fantastic story - I loved the way you portrayed his thought process etc etc, really made me feel like I was living through the moments :) also kinda feel sorry Emerson haha - I hope you continue chapter fics, a great start!

d'aawwwww. :D Ivan's such a jerk, but he's also so sweet.

Nico is the best. Seriously.