|Reviews for A Love To Live For|
| Kara Wright chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
I think its great you are throwing yourself into researching a period and place in time not many people are aware ok unlike tudor england! Its ok to use poetic license if the history has not been documented so you shouldnt feel guilty about enriching it. The one improv i can think of is maybe removimg traces of 20th century slang like 'okay' and 'scumbag' as it pulls the reader out of the time period. Great job and keep writing!
| BLOOD RED GEISHA chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Reminds me of Roots with Kunta Kinte..Please update i like this alot.
| XxScriboLegoxX chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I really like this so far. The Characters are well developed and believable. I really like Dumisani and don't want to see him hurt (emotionally or physically) but I have a feeling that he will. He seems like a good man, husband and father.
I think this is going to be a really good story.
Keep it up!