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| classic violet chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Love the diction in this, and the second and last stanzas especially.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
"walking without purpose/or a destination in mind,"... it seemed awkward to me that you had the a with destination, but not purpose. It just sounded weird to me.
I liked the piece though. The last stanza is a great sort of concept squeezing meaning out of meaningless. Really interesting. Great job!
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