|Reviews for Love and War|
| SilenceInHonour chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
I like how you don't make the narrator a 'weak' female. Generally I don't like love too much but this has just hints of it so it's okay. I think that the poem had a fairly 'good' ring to it though that made it not too heavy to read - if you know what I mean?
I'm no good at reviewing poetry... and not much better at writing it. *laughs*
| the-lovely-anomaly chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
Another brilliant, albeit strange, poem. (Definitely your forte.) I wonder why he was tracking her. Not that it matters, I'm just curious. This feels like something I'd see in a romance movie: girl falls in love with the hitman who's supposed to kill her. I really like it, though. The way you wrote it is very refreshing, and even a tad bit humorous: "and piss on his body..." Nice job! More bizzare poetry, please!
| the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Sensual, entrancing, and practically perfect. Short though it may be, it's vivid and burrows down to the core. I'm not 100% sure what it all means, I'll admit, but I love it anyway. Every line - every word - I love. I can't even pick a favorite part, it's all so gorgeous.