Reviews for A Gift of Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was just thinking about this story and I thought I check on it and see how it was going. I'm glad to see that you finished it and I would love a copy once you've finished with your editing. |
![]() ![]() quite possibly one of the best stories I have ever read, published or otherwise. Thought-provoking, with a well-sounded plot and amazing details. As a frequent silent reader of this site, I'm very glad you made your characters mature, reasonable people with good sense and practicality. Plus, I love the interwoven supernatural and realistic themes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally, I'm here! :) Loved Max's line about Rapunzel. And I'm pleased that Rose will be sticking around for Dumbledore time D She certainly keeps busy, hahaha - she's had the most screen time of all your characters. Perhaps she needs the next romance! |
![]() ![]() Thank you for this book. I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter. I know you struggled, at times, with this one, but in the end it was very well done. It is, by turns, funny, thought provoking, and suspenseful all while remaining true to character and story. I love intelligently written books, and this is one. I hope it's fate is not USB purgatory, it completes the trilogy and is still a great stand alone read. At the moment my personal favorite line goes to Mary and her Dumbledore quote, it was kind of nice for her to have closure. I definitely would like a copy of this, with or without revisions and when it's available on Amazon I'll buy a copy too. So once more I'm going to thank you for this book that has given me hours of reading pleasure then I am going to do the horrible fan thing and start wondering about what you're writing next. Will it be something different? Will it be about ghosts? Tassamara? Dillon? Maggie and Max- what's going on there? What was Jamie saying they would experiment on Travis for? Is the next book about Travis? When...? LOL You get the idea. Hey, I just had a thought, you finished your novel and it's only the second day of NaNoWriMo, boy do you write fast. O.K. I'll stop, Thanks Again, Keep Writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say you ended it beautifully. Thank you for the sleepness nights, ignoring of the homework. It wad all worth it to read this wonderful story. You have a big fan right here. |
![]() ![]() Loved this story. Very cute. I loved the fact that Kenzie now can't stop talking. I loved the story. I can already see this as a movie in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you notice in Chapter 8 Colin says he closed the bedroom door to keep Kenzi from hearing his conversation with Nat, then in Chapter 9 he gestures toward the living room door when he's going to check on Kenzi's drawing? Thanks for chapter 29, I knew that whole bit with the motion of a vehicle was going to come up again. I like that it's a bit of a misdirection when Colin seems to always go in the wrong direction to find the kids then just pops up. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Go Mac!'! I was brought to tears i thought she wasn't going to make it for a minute, that's a great place for a cliff hanger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every day I check for updates, even though fictionpress notifies me when there are any. Thank you for today's, a fun addition to an otherwise yucky day. Poor Rose, all the responsibilities of an Ang..umm and not to many powers. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() I liked the chapter,can't wait for the next. I really like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo not the cliff hanger. Great chapter |
![]() ![]() So loved this chapter. Can not wait for the next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So exciting, if only this wasn't the current last chapter. On the edge of my seat, great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wooo this story is getting better and better everytime i read more! I think I'm getting addicted, lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heartstopping! |