Reviews for The Reflected World
Epic Legkicker chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Very, very nice. I imagined standing in a wave-less ocean, stretching out to the horizon. Beautiful, just beautiful that you captured imagery without description.

One bit I do find a small fault in is that I think it would be better if you continued with questions as opposed to switching to statements. Usually you should either pick one way to go, or just be completely sporadic.

Oh well, as I say poetry is not always in the eyes of the beholder as art is, but in the eyes of the poet...

Keep up the good writing my friend,

- Epic Leg